Letter+to+Bob+Barker

Here will be our draft of the letter to Bob Barker.

This is a link to Bob Barker's letter to SeaWorld:  [|Letter to SeaWorld]

Dear Mr. Bob Barker,

On behalf of the Education Department at Central Connecticut State University we would like to begin by sending you our gratitude for your many efforts to raise awareness about animal rights and animal right activism. We also greatly appreciate the letter you wrote to Hamilton James expressing your concern for the marinelife at SeaWorld. We would also like to commend you on your contributions toward the Sea Shepeard Conservation Society for the "Bob Barker" anti-whaling ship used to discover the location of the Japanese Whaling Fleet.

We recently viewed the movie "The Cove" in our Effective Elementary Teaching Course. As a class we were greatly inspired by the efforts of Ric O'Bary and crew to raise awareness about the issues that are arised in the movie. Our class will be putting on 2 performances at our school in order to spread the word and raise more awareness about this issue. We will also be notifying various local media outlets of our performance and this issue in order to gain as much public attention as possible. We would like to extend an invitation to our performance on Friday, May 14, 2010 to you. It would be a great honor to have someone as passionate as yourself present for the performance.

This is what I have came up with so far...feel free to edit!
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